Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Cross generational schoolgirl action

Quick contribution to a DrawingBoard.org thread.

You know, I'm really starting to dislike that intro to my book posted below. It needs more tweaking. There's no sense of speed and the lead up to the helipcopter crash on page three doesn't work. The rest of the book is coming together really smoothly, just this intro that doesn't want to cooperate for some reason.